Which Logo Design...

[wuffy]

As a few know I make videos and such, and i'm redesigning the logo as it was rather butch/macho/WWF styled. Was too raw and plain. So I made a few and refined them to these 3 which I like. Any suggestions would be helpful.

They'll always be backed on black as in the photos, and eventually I might get t-shirts or caps with it on. Maybe.

Cheers

[Astoria Paranoia]

Number 1

Number 2 is stupid to read

That R looks funny too

[happybaboon]

Number 1. Number 2 looks like it says "Schrenzed" or "shredenz".

[FLATULENTFRIEND]

Numero Uno

[great uncle bulgaria]

2 is unintelligible

[Oli]

The crisp letters from #2 in the pattern of #1 - no way shrenzed!

I don't particularly like the font either, it's all over the place and the s, e, r and z look particularly liz. IMO.

[its that guy]

1 is the best. 2 is dumb.

[cruiser]

Take care the fern isn't a copyrighted version. Not that many would bother you about pursuing a web vid maker, but always good to know your logo is clear.

And then register it as a trademark. It's only $75 or so. Protects you if someone else uses it

[Conners]

Saving all my love, you're my number one, my number one

I don't understand Number 2. It has an extra "e" dunnit? And concur with Oli, the font is pretty whack. Like the fern on the NZ though

[Wobbler]

number 2 sux

[WH]

Number 1 by a considerable margin, but you need to change the 'R', which isn't very legible at a glance.

[Psilan]

Get rid of the inner shadow. Or maybe just keep it for the NZ.
R looks like a P raping an N.

[philstar]

The crisp letters from #2 in the pattern of #1 - no way shrenzed!

I don't particularly like the font either, it's all over the place and the s, e, r and z look particularly liz. IMO.

the letters in 1 hurt my eyes, they look kinda moiré pattern ish

[HarryPlatt]

1st one is the stronger of the two, but still it is not that great. You might want add a symbol that represents mtb as well as having fern. I did this one for my level 2 design folio.

[shmoodiver]

mmm yar, font is very meh. have a look at other brands logo's and don't be afraid to pilfer ideas. as for the font, if you want something unique get an existing font and mess with it a little, making your own is difficult and uggo. pm me if you want moar tips etc and i'm happy to critique with a subjective/objective view ( i forget which)